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[Syma Khalid]

Ina's 1935 film

 

[richardcb]

Nice shot, Syma. Fabulously dramatic sky.

 

[John Milton]

Agree the sky really makes this shot, I'm unsure if the girls add scale or maybe would have been better to have let them exit stage left

 

[Venomator]

Agree with both on that, the sky is excellently exposed...

The people (students?) add both context and scale, they can stay for me...

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[Syma Khalid]

Thanks for the comments. I am undecided on the students myself. I took the photos for college publications so wanted to have them in, but not sure about the artistic merit. Still they do add something

 

[richardcb]

Agree with John. Ideally the people (students aren't people Ven? ) should either be entering from the right or looking into the picture from the left. As is stands they take the eye off to the edge of the frame. But crowd control should not really be part of a photographer's skills.

 

[Syma Khalid]

Thanks- will remember for next time